Tyrone Carver

Well written. Loving your crews take on the mission premise. Looking forward to collabing with you.

Nice one! I'm intrigued by the Acolytes of Reunification concept yiu're using. I have a post that can link in with this coming shortly. The crew of the Malem will be in touch ;)

A teacher- "But wait, theres no dialogue, remember everyone, good writing is when you show not tell the reader."

Lil Johnny Kingsmam- "Hold my koolaid."

Loved it, another banger bro.

This post is amazing. Supercharged with atleast 1.21 jigawatts of raw emotion. The blending of humour and raw drama happened seemlessly. And just writing about the radishes had my eyes watering, well done sir.

Great start. I like his quiet efficiency. A nice quick bit of banter with a new crewmate. I'm intrigued by the Medical Logistics angle, from a purely factoid nerd POV. Well done.

You got me with the title again brother. And the last line did not disappoint(though with you, it never does)

"Not so precious now that you’ve been popped, eh pal?".lol. Succulent stuff my friend. Great piece.

Had to double check and make sure I wasn't reading something by Danielle Steele at one point James. You have a hidden talent for romance. The line "If you're my muse" was epic. Well done

I enjoyed the seperate setups fot the pairs before their impromptu breakfast double date. Felt organic and real. We'll done. 72 strong!

Such a fun little story. The camcorder is great. A couple minor spelling mistakes, but they didn't hurt the reading (I am a prolific offender on that front, try as I might, so no judgement lol). And good ole Henry, doing his thang. Cheers.

You are on a roll Vorien. Love it. The plot thickening agents you use are marvelous Great action all around

I'm officially hooked, this is my new fav series to follow. Well done Vorien, loved the twisted in the opening scene.

Yes, yes, yes. Loved it. 'There is no cloud' gave me some psuedo 'There are 4 lights' vibes. Felt like I was there.

Cool post, I liked the little snapshots from various crews pov's

Uh Oh. I knew someone would get into trouble for that lol. Great post you two.

Uncle Harry will definitely approve of some lowkey extortion ;)

I got goosebumls several times reading this. Well done, the raw emotions in each moment was palpable.

Wow, what a magnum opus bud. Love it. You use of Terra Prime has literally been a chefs kiss. Great drama, and you mixed exposition, dialogue and action well in this one.

Great post. Loved the self destruct sequence, and Devron going down like a champ. There's a few typos but they didn't hurt the piece. I'd be covered in sweat too if I'd had nightmare.

If this is your first time, I look forward to reading what you produce when you actually hit your strike. Very well written. I like the back story with the OpsO and CO. Great stuff, easy reading, but with lots packed into it