[TLF Phase 2] Comment Challenge

Description

We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of The Lost Fleet Fleet Action, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Lost Fleet Mission. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!

Criteria

  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented, and include a total count.
  • Stories must be part of the Lost Fleet Mission and be posted during Phase 2.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Aryanna Rigras 2486

https://bravofleet.com/story/80313
3 June 2023

2023-06-03 23:37:44
Reva Sarrik 2185

https://bravofleet.com/story/79032 Mackenzie (?)
https://bravofleet.com/story/79133 Mackenzie (?)
https://bravofleet.com/story/79998 Mackenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/80131 Mackenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/80257 MacKenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/81001 MacKenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/81082 Mackenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/81143 Mackenzie

6 or 8. I believe the first two were from part 1.

2023-06-03 23:15:40
Azras Dex 10

1. https://bravofleet.com/story/79643/
2. https://bravofleet.com/story/79800/
3. https://bravofleet.com/story/80015/
4. https://bravofleet.com/story/80026/
5. https://bravofleet.com/story/80106/
6. https://bravofleet.com/story/80231/
7. https://bravofleet.com/story/80297/
8. https://bravofleet.com/story/80421/
9. https://bravofleet.com/story/80558/
10. https://bravofleet.com/story/79940/
11. https://bravofleet.com/story/79720/
12. https://bravofleet.com/story/79802/
13. https://bravofleet.com/story/80276/
14. https://bravofleet.com/story/80216/
15. https://bravofleet.com/story/80616/
16. https://bravofleet.com/story/80347
17. https://bravofleet.com/story/80500
18. https://bravofleet.com/story/80790
19. https://bravofleet.com/story/79658
20. https://bravofleet.com/story/79695
21. https://bravofleet.com/story/80429
22. https://bravofleet.com/story/80498
23. https://bravofleet.com/story/81135
24. https://bravofleet.com/story/80614/
25. https://bravofleet.com/story/80830/
26. https://bravofleet.com/story/80999/
27. https://bravofleet.com/story/81202/

2023-06-03 16:55:15
Th'lora Vehl 2240

Total Comment Count: 2

USS Shepard - Chapter 1 - https://bravofleet.com/story/80698
USS Opharus - Looking Forward - https://bravofleet.com/story/80746

2023-06-03 16:29:21
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

https://bravofleet.com/story/79964/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79533/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79807/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79926/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80067/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80267/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80347/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80151/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80152/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80500/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80790/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80697/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80987/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80083/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80213/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80979/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80023/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80984/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80530/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80511/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81230/

2023-06-03 13:30:54
Andreus Kohl 2374

29 comments:
https://bravofleet.com/story/79658
https://bravofleet.com/story/79643
https://bravofleet.com/story/79205/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79836/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79726
https://bravofleet.com/story/79800
https://bravofleet.com/story/79802
https://bravofleet.com/story/79827
https://bravofleet.com/story/79927
https://bravofleet.com/story/80283
https://bravofleet.com/story/79841/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80356/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80404/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79945
https://bravofleet.com/story/79481
https://bravofleet.com/story/79888
https://bravofleet.com/story/80140
https://bravofleet.com/story/80393
https://bravofleet.com/story/79949
https://bravofleet.com/story/80513/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80582/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80841/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80984
https://bravofleet.com/story/80755
https://bravofleet.com/story/80979
https://bravofleet.com/story/80511
https://bravofleet.com/story/79983
https://bravofleet.com/story/80021
https://bravofleet.com/story/80530

2023-06-03 13:07:49
Sazra Kobahl 2545

1. https://bravofleet.com/story/79643
2. https://bravofleet.com/story/79800
3. https://bravofleet.com/story/80015
4. https://bravofleet.com/story/80026
5. https://bravofleet.com/story/80106
6. https://bravofleet.com/story/80231
7. https://bravofleet.com/story/80297
8. https://bravofleet.com/story/80370
9. https://bravofleet.com/story/80421
10. https://bravofleet.com/story/79513
11. https://bravofleet.com/story/80152
12. https://bravofleet.com/story/80530
13. https://bravofleet.com/story/80503/
14. https://bravofleet.com/story/78526
15. https://bravofleet.com/story/78890
16. https://bravofleet.com/story/79869
17. https://bravofleet.com/story/79941
18. https://bravofleet.com/story/80084
19. https://bravofleet.com/story/79983
20. https://bravofleet.com/story/80310
21. https://bravofleet.com/story/80614/
22. https://bravofleet.com/story/80627/
23. https://bravofleet.com/story/80694/
24. https://bravofleet.com/story/80698/
25. https://bravofleet.com/story/78669
26. https://bravofleet.com/story/78671
27. https://bravofleet.com/story/79410
28. https://bravofleet.com/story/80582
29. https://bravofleet.com/story/80830
30. https://bravofleet.com/story/80853
31. https://bravofleet.com/story/80858
32. https://bravofleet.com/story/80324
33. https://bravofleet.com/story/77828
34. https://bravofleet.com/story/79043
35. https://bravofleet.com/story/79945
36. https://bravofleet.com/story/80323
37. https://bravofleet.com/story/81011
38. https://bravofleet.com/story/80999
39. https://bravofleet.com/story/80977
40. https://bravofleet.com/story/81050/
41. https://bravofleet.com/story/81081
42. https://bravofleet.com/story/81202
43. https://bravofleet.com/story/80489

2023-06-03 10:53:11
Aris Suin 2583

https://bravofleet.com/story/79927/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80627/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80662/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80511/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80884/
https://bravofleet.com/story/80830/

Total Comments: 6

2023-06-03 04:33:26
James Neidlinger 1

https://bravofleet.com/story/81055
https://bravofleet.com/story/80513
https://bravofleet.com/story/80976
https://bravofleet.com/story/80847
https://bravofleet.com/story/79554
https://bravofleet.com/story/79533
https://bravofleet.com/story/79658
https://bravofleet.com/story/79695
https://bravofleet.com/story/79136
https://bravofleet.com/story/79348
https://bravofleet.com/story/80979
https://bravofleet.com/story/80884
https://bravofleet.com/story/79927
https://bravofleet.com/story/80067
https://bravofleet.com/story/80140
https://bravofleet.com/story/80081
https://bravofleet.com/story/80151
https://bravofleet.com/story/80429
https://bravofleet.com/story/80393
https://bravofleet.com/story/80362
https://bravofleet.com/story/80473
https://bravofleet.com/story/81135
https://bravofleet.com/story/80564
https://bravofleet.com/story/80323
https://bravofleet.com/story/81149
https://bravofleet.com/story/80500
https://bravofleet.com/story/79410
https://bravofleet.com/story/80508
https://bravofleet.com/story/80530
https://bravofleet.com/story/80511
https://bravofleet.com/story/80794
https://bravofleet.com/story/81001
https://bravofleet.com/story/80792
https://bravofleet.com/story/80693
https://bravofleet.com/story/80703
https://bravofleet.com/story/81082
https://bravofleet.com/story/80704
https://bravofleet.com/story/80834

2023-06-03 01:38:08
Edwin Wagner 2468

Total Comments
Story Link Comment Total = 40
https://bravofleet.com/story/79802 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79720 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79800 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79757 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79205 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79838 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79836 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79827 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79807/ 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79869 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79904 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79841 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79927/ 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/78844/ 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79926 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79964 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/79949 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80015 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80026/ 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80069 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80023 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80106 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80152 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80140 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80151 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80083 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80116 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80231 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80216 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80267 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80276 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80297 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80291 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80999 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80858 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80979 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80977 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80892 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80324 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/80755/ 1

2023-06-02 20:49:38
Noli Auru 18

Kai1701E BFMSID:18 Links to all comments available on the phase 2 tab as found here: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1npebZOG_JiHJyg9FOIWkN689_yDsF1_d6mDBEPHjxzo/edit?usp=sharing

2023-06-02 20:25:55
Kristina Tyelin 2622

Comments - 3 Total
https://bravofleet.com/story/79998
https://bravofleet.com/story/79879
https://bravofleet.com/story/79927

2023-06-02 18:22:42
Theo Barrington 2080

Links for comments:

https://bravofleet.com/story/78667
https://bravofleet.com/story/78390
https://bravofleet.com/story/80245
https://bravofleet.com/story/78890
https://bravofleet.com/story/80084

2023-05-27 18:04:32
James MacLeod 653

Character: Timothy Vadney
BFMS ID: 653
https://bravofleet.com/story/80152

Word Count: 316 Words

2023-05-27 16:14:46

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