Stormy

I found myself chuckling a bit while reading the story. I really enjoyed the back-and-forth dialogue. I don’t think that gouge is going to buff out.

This is a very solid beginning. I'm intrigued by the previous incident that took place on Valentine's Day and how that is going to fit into the story. I'll be looking out for a pattern.

I’m drawn in right from the intros! The character conflicts are going to be interesting to follow along with. I can’t wait to see more of Madame Collage!! I felt that the characters had depth to them already based on their interactions with each other.