Jaxon Thorne

I found this to be engaging. The characters personalities are visable, I can see them before me like in a good Star Trek movie. I like the whole premise of them transporting to aid others and look forward to reading more posts.

I found this to be engaging. The characters personalities are visable, I can see them before me like in a good Star Trek movie. I like the whole premise of them transporting to aid others and look forward to reading more posts.

This engaged me as I got to know the characters and their deep feelings for each other. As I read I found myself wondering what happened to the Winslow …waiting to find out. It leaves me knowing I will keep a look out for More as I want to read what happens with this story. Nice piece!

This engaged me as I got to know the characters and their deep feelings for each other. As I read I found myself wondering what happened to the Winslow …waiting to find out. It leaves me knowing I will keep a look out for More as I want to read what happens with this story. Nice piece!

I felt the loss as if it was my own. Writing death scenes is not easy but you wrote it well. I found myself not wanting to quit, I had to read the very end