[WATB Phase 2]: Comment Challenge

Description

We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of We Are the BorgFleet Action, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide We Are the Borg Mission. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!

Criteria

  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented, and include a total count.
  • Stories must be part of the We Are the Borg Mission and be posted during Phase 2.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Keith Anderson 1849

Total: 9

Resolute - 1
https://bravofleet.com/story/93636

Polaris - 6
https://bravofleet.com/story/93299
https://bravofleet.com/story/93618
https://bravofleet.com/story/93869
https://bravofleet.com/story/94019/
https://bravofleet.com/story/94118/
https://bravofleet.com/story/94200/

Odyssey - 2
https://bravofleet.com/story/93448
https://bravofleet.com/story/93450

2023-11-25 23:57:13
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

https://bravofleet.com/story/93113/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93109/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93301
https://bravofleet.com/story/93876
https://bravofleet.com/story/93579/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93299/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93665/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93696/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93746/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93618/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93869
https://bravofleet.com/story/94200/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93814/

2023-11-25 23:51:47
Reva Sarrik 2185

https://bravofleet.com/story/93299 Polaris 10
https://bravofleet.com/story/93618 Polaris 11
https://bravofleet.com/story/93869 Polaris 12

2023-11-25 23:51:46
Varen Wyll 2419

https://bravofleet.com/story/93510
https://bravofleet.com/story/93653

2 this phase. time was very much against me unfortunately.

2023-11-25 23:15:06
Azras Dex 10

1. https://bravofleet.com/story/93844
2. https://bravofleet.com/story/93701
3. https://bravofleet.com/story/93636
4. https://bravofleet.com/story/93510
5. https://bravofleet.com/story/93653
6. https://bravofleet.com/story/94043

2023-11-25 23:11:17
Sazra Kobahl 2545

1) https://bravofleet.com/story/93147
2) https://bravofleet.com/story/93318

I have been to sick the last few weeks, so apologies!

2023-11-25 18:26:45
James Neidlinger 1

5 comments

https://bravofleet.com/story/93625
https://bravofleet.com/story/93661
https://bravofleet.com/story/94079
https://bravofleet.com/story/93876
https://bravofleet.com/story/94143

2023-11-25 15:28:46
Theo Barrington 2080

https://bravofleet.com/story/92209
https://bravofleet.com/story/92435
https://bravofleet.com/story/92503

Total = 3

2023-11-25 14:20:41
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

https://bravofleet.com/story/93113/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93109/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93301
https://bravofleet.com/story/93876
https://bravofleet.com/story/93579/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93299/
https://bravofleet.com/story/93665/

2023-11-24 15:22:09
Thelor ch'Idrani 2109

https://bravofleet.com/story/93628

2023-11-19 01:53:10

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