[TLF Phase 3] Comment Challenge

Description

We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of The Lost Fleet Fleet Action, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Lost Fleet Mission. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!

Criteria

  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented, and include a total count.
  • Stories must be part of the Lost Fleet Mission and be posted during Phase 3.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Azras Dex 10

1. https://bravofleet.com/story/81434
2. https://bravofleet.com/story/81445/
3. https://bravofleet.com/story/81764/
4. https://bravofleet.com/story/81751
5. https://bravofleet.com/story/82308
6. https://bravofleet.com/story/81218/
7. https://bravofleet.com/story/81750/
8. https://bravofleet.com/story/81010
9. https://bravofleet.com/story/81366
10. https://bravofleet.com/story/81454/
11. https://bravofleet.com/story/81903/
12. https://bravofleet.com/story/82662/

2023-06-17 21:54:32
Sazra Kobahl 2545

1. https://bravofleet.com/story/81277
2. https://bravofleet.com/story/81279
3. https://bravofleet.com/story/81445
4. https://bravofleet.com/story/81464
5. https://bravofleet.com/story/81470
6. https://bravofleet.com/story/81547
7. https://bravofleet.com/story/81610/
8. https://bravofleet.com/story/81764
9. https://bravofleet.com/story/81751
10. https://bravofleet.com/story/81885/
11. https://bravofleet.com/story/81911
12. https://bravofleet.com/story/81966
13. https://bravofleet.com/story/82078
14. https://bravofleet.com/story/82132
15. https://bravofleet.com/story/82196
16. https://bravofleet.com/story/82189
17. https://bravofleet.com/story/82268/
18. https://bravofleet.com/story/82293
19. https://bravofleet.com/story/82238
20. https://bravofleet.com/story/82353
21. https://bravofleet.com/story/82365/
22. https://bravofleet.com/story/82367/
23. https://bravofleet.com/story/82370/
24. https://bravofleet.com/story/79002
25. https://bravofleet.com/story/79208
26. https://bravofleet.com/story/79757
27. https://bravofleet.com/story/81013
28. https://bravofleet.com/story/81524
29. https://bravofleet.com/story/81692
30. https://bravofleet.com/story/82415
31. https://bravofleet.com/story/82417
32. https://bravofleet.com/story/82472
33. https://bravofleet.com/story/81595
34. https://bravofleet.com/story/79188
35. https://bravofleet.com/story/82482
36. https://bravofleet.com/story/82479
37. https://bravofleet.com/story/82589/
38. https://bravofleet.com/story/82628
39. https://bravofleet.com/story/82565

2023-06-17 18:01:18
James Neidlinger 1

https://bravofleet.com/story/81751
https://bravofleet.com/story/81466
https://bravofleet.com/story/81464
https://bravofleet.com/story/81308
https://bravofleet.com/story/81476
https://bravofleet.com/story/81511
https://bravofleet.com/story/82653
https://bravofleet.com/story/81128
https://bravofleet.com/story/81576
https://bravofleet.com/story/82673
https://bravofleet.com/story/81434
https://bravofleet.com/story/81597
https://bravofleet.com/story/81129
https://bravofleet.com/story/82544
https://bravofleet.com/story/82619
https://bravofleet.com/story/82731

2023-06-17 14:44:01
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

https://bravofleet.com/story/81434/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81751/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81947/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82369/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82468/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82571/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82204/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82673/

2023-06-17 11:22:09
Aris Suin 2583

https://bravofleet.com/story/81576/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81454/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82142/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81903/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81724/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81010/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82365/

7 Comments

2023-06-17 11:01:51
Andreus Kohl 2374

36 comments
https://bravofleet.com/story/81903
https://bravofleet.com/story/81764
https://bravofleet.com/story/81966
https://bravofleet.com/story/81850
https://bravofleet.com/story/82122
https://bravofleet.com/story/81877
https://bravofleet.com/story/81656/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81576
https://bravofleet.com/story/82135
https://bravofleet.com/story/81911
https://bravofleet.com/story/82078
https://bravofleet.com/story/80880
https://bravofleet.com/story/81476
https://bravofleet.com/story/82192
https://bravofleet.com/story/82359
https://bravofleet.com/story/82470
https://bravofleet.com/story/81128
https://bravofleet.com/story/81129
https://bravofleet.com/story/82429
https://bravofleet.com/story/81130
https://bravofleet.com/story/82361/
https://bravofleet.com/story/81831
https://bravofleet.com/story/82249
https://bravofleet.com/story/82383
https://bravofleet.com/story/82503
https://bravofleet.com/story/82417
https://bravofleet.com/story/82543
https://bravofleet.com/story/82548
https://bravofleet.com/story/82221
https://bravofleet.com/story/82477
https://bravofleet.com/story/82308
https://bravofleet.com/story/82571
https://bravofleet.com/story/82569
https://bravofleet.com/story/82653
https://bravofleet.com/story/81366
https://bravofleet.com/story/82472

2023-06-17 01:22:28
Noli Auru 18

Kai1701E BFMS ID 18 Comments accessible of Phase 3 tab. https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1npebZOG_JiHJyg9FOIWkN689_yDsF1_d6mDBEPHjxzo/edit?usp=sharing

2023-06-16 22:10:49
Theo Barrington 2080

Entry for Phase 3, Comment Challenge:

https://bravofleet.com/story/81885
https://bravofleet.com/story/82238/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82135
https://bravofleet.com/story/82365/
https://bravofleet.com/story/82367
https://bravofleet.com/story/81128
https://bravofleet.com/story/81129
https://bravofleet.com/story/81130

Count: 8

2023-06-16 19:57:08
Kristina Tyelin 2622

Comments - 5 Total
https://bravofleet.com/story/81576
https://bravofleet.com/story/81833
https://bravofleet.com/story/81821
https://bravofleet.com/story/81745
https://bravofleet.com/story/81511

2023-06-16 19:26:48

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