The Raptor’s Wings: [Week 1] The Romulan Bad Guy

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General Nedar (Commodore Oh) is the leader of the Tal Shiar within the Romulan Free State. Within the Romulan Star Empire faction, create an equally villanish Romulan leader. This can be an admiral, a senator, or even just a warbird commander. Using the BFMS character creator, create a history for the character, a personality, and make them stand out!


  • Entries should be no more than 2,500 words and will be judged on creativity, composition, and completeness.
  • All entries should be submitted via BFMS link to the character submitted through the Enter Competition form.
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