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[TLF Phase 1] Comment Challenge


We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of The Lost Fleet Fleet Action, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Lost Fleet Mission. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!


  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented, and include a total count.
  • Stories must be part of the Lost Fleet Mission and be posted during Phase 1.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.


User ID Date Entry
Imya Jori 10 2023-05-20 22:48:45
Reva Sarrik 2185 2023-05-20 22:41:10
Struan MacLeod 2197 2023-05-20 22:36:00
Khim Samnang 2222 2023-05-20 21:33:02
Keziah Nazir 18 2023-05-20 20:42:48
Ryoko Takato 2545 2023-05-20 19:42:49
Tavek 2622 2023-05-20 19:07:06
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121 2023-05-20 17:26:23
Aryanna Rigras 2486 2023-05-20 17:16:41
Andreus Kohl 2374 2023-05-20 13:48:48
Th'lora Vehl 2240 2023-05-20 01:31:55
Aris Suin 2583 2023-05-19 06:23:43
Thelor ch'Idrani 2109 2023-05-19 00:24:41
James MacLeod 653 2023-05-05 16:17:02

Competition Winners

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