[TLF Phase 1] Comment Challenge

Description

We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of The Lost Fleet Fleet Action, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Lost Fleet Mission. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!

Criteria

  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented, and include a total count.
  • Stories must be part of the Lost Fleet Mission and be posted during Phase 1.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Azras Dex 10

1. https://bravofleet.com/story/77560
2. https://bravofleet.com/story/77627
3. https://bravofleet.com/story/77696
4. https://bravofleet.com/story/77705
5. https://bravofleet.com/story/77686
6. https://bravofleet.com/story/77740
7. https://bravofleet.com/story/77865
8. https://bravofleet.com/story/77870
9. https://bravofleet.com/story/77884
10. https://bravofleet.com/story/77886
11. https://bravofleet.com/story/77933
12. https://bravofleet.com/story/77952
13. https://bravofleet.com/story/77970
14. https://bravofleet.com/story/77977
15. https://bravofleet.com/story/77584
16. https://bravofleet.com/story/77982
17. https://bravofleet.com/story/78054
18. https://bravofleet.com/story/78125
19. https://bravofleet.com/story/78182/
20. https://bravofleet.com/story/77902/
21. https://bravofleet.com/story/78003/
22. https://bravofleet.com/story/78506/
23. https://bravofleet.com/story/77999/
24. https://bravofleet.com/story/78260/
25. https://bravofleet.com/story/78344/
26. https://bravofleet.com/story/78498/
27. https://bravofleet.com/story/78628/
28. https://bravofleet.com/story/78341
29. https://bravofleet.com/story/78537
30. https://bravofleet.com/story/78654
31. https://bravofleet.com/story/78198/
32. https://bravofleet.com/story/78739/
33. https://bravofleet.com/story/78986
34. https://bravofleet.com/story/78233/
35. https://bravofleet.com/story/78410/
36. https://bravofleet.com/story/78490/
37. https://bravofleet.com/story/79060/
38. https://bravofleet.com/story/78622/
39. https://bravofleet.com/story/78930/
40. https://bravofleet.com/story/79037/
41. https://bravofleet.com/story/79346/
42. https://bravofleet.com/story/79255
43. https://bravofleet.com/story/77986
44. https://bravofleet.com/story/78261

2023-05-20 22:48:45
Reva Sarrik 2185

Bad ME week, so not much reading 😬

https://bravofleet.com/story/78356 MacKenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/78691. MacKenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/79183 Mackenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/77921 Dragon
https://bravofleet.com/story/78496 Dragon

Five total. 😅🤦‍♀️

2023-05-20 22:41:10
Struan MacLeod 2197

User: bri.whyte (2197)
TF: 93

Comment count: 2

Links to stories with my comments:
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https://bravofleet.com/story/77740
https://bravofleet.com/story/77884

2023-05-20 22:36:00
Khim Samnang 2222

8

https://bravofleet.com/story/77560

https://bravofleet.com/story/77549

https://bravofleet.com/story/77627

https://bravofleet.com/story/77670

https://bravofleet.com/story/76554

https://bravofleet.com/story/77696

https://bravofleet.com/story/77686

https://bravofleet.com/story/77970

2023-05-20 21:33:02
Noli Auru 18

Kai1701E BFMSID:18 I can confirm I have completed 42 comments, with links to all available here, in my data tracker for the FA. https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1npebZOG_JiHJyg9FOIWkN689_yDsF1_d6mDBEPHjxzo/edit?usp=sharing

2023-05-20 20:42:48
Sazra Kobahl 2545

All recorded comments:

1 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77696/
2 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77686/
3 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77549
4 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77670
5 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77728/
6 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77705
7 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77613
8 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77740
9 - https://bravofleet.com/story/76554
10 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77776
11 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77569
12 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77814
13 - https://bravofleet.com/story/76554
14 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77865
15 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77870
16 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77875
17 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77884
18 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77886
19 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77952
20 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77933
21 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77963
22 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77970
23 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77974
24 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77982
25 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77984
26 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77986
27 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77780
28 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77584
29 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78096
30 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78049
31 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78125
32 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78127
33 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78198
34 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78208
35 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78222
36 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78213
37 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78393
38 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78678
39 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78183
40 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78390
41 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78582
42 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78898
43 - https://bravofleet.com/story/77873
44 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78909
45 - https://bravofleet.com/story/79151
46 - https://bravofleet.com/story/79155
47 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78054
48 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78233
49 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78287
50 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78410
51 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78490
52 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78558
53 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78558
54 - https://bravofleet.com/story/78848
55 - https://bravofleet.com/story/79060
56 - https://bravofleet.com/story/79083
57 - https://bravofleet.com/story/79435

2023-05-20 19:42:49
Kristina Tyelin 2622

Comments - 30 Total
https://bravofleet.com/story/79354
https://bravofleet.com/story/79183
https://bravofleet.com/story/79032
https://bravofleet.com/story/79133
https://bravofleet.com/story/79125
https://bravofleet.com/story/77870
https://bravofleet.com/story/78058
https://bravofleet.com/story/77627
https://bravofleet.com/story/78663
https://bravofleet.com/story/78691
https://bravofleet.com/story/78633
https://bravofleet.com/story/78563
https://bravofleet.com/story/78074
https://bravofleet.com/story/77984
https://bravofleet.com/story/77670
https://bravofleet.com/story/76554
https://bravofleet.com/story/77963
https://bravofleet.com/story/78049
https://bravofleet.com/story/78213
https://bravofleet.com/story/77677
https://bravofleet.com/story/77955
https://bravofleet.com/story/78101
https://bravofleet.com/story/78121
https://bravofleet.com/story/78254
https://bravofleet.com/story/78508
https://bravofleet.com/story/78263
https://bravofleet.com/story/78356
https://bravofleet.com/story/78457
https://bravofleet.com/story/78514
https://bravofleet.com/story/77584

2023-05-20 19:07:06
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

https://bravofleet.com/story/77686/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77970/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77865/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77952/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77986/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78074/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77921/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77627/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77870
https://bravofleet.com/story/78058
https://bravofleet.com/story/77670
https://bravofleet.com/story/77584/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77740/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78556/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78341/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78198/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78537
https://bravofleet.com/story/78739/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78654/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78857
https://bravofleet.com/story/79251/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78924/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79067/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77728
https://bravofleet.com/story/78664
https://bravofleet.com/story/78891
https://bravofleet.com/story/78986/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79159/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79255/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77967/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78122/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78237/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78261/

2023-05-20 17:26:23
Aryanna Rigras 2486

https://bravofleet.com/story/78961
20 may 2023

2023-05-20 17:16:41
Andreus Kohl 2374

70 Comments:
https://bravofleet.com/story/77670
https://bravofleet.com/story/77627
https://bravofleet.com/story/77560
https://bravofleet.com/story/77549
https://bravofleet.com/story/77696
https://bravofleet.com/story/77677
https://bravofleet.com/story/77705
https://bravofleet.com/story/77728
https://bravofleet.com/story/77613
https://bravofleet.com/story/77740
https://bravofleet.com/story/77744
https://bravofleet.com/story/76554
https://bravofleet.com/story/77776
https://bravofleet.com/story/77569
https://bravofleet.com/story/77814
https://bravofleet.com/story/77865
https://bravofleet.com/story/77870
https://bravofleet.com/story/77984
https://bravofleet.com/story/77875
https://bravofleet.com/story/77884
https://bravofleet.com/story/77933
https://bravofleet.com/story/77952
https://bravofleet.com/story/77963
https://bravofleet.com/story/77921
https://bravofleet.com/story/77955
https://bravofleet.com/story/77974
https://bravofleet.com/story/78185
https://bravofleet.com/story/78487
https://bravofleet.com/story/78533
https://bravofleet.com/story/78569
https://bravofleet.com/story/78572/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78669/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78671/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78697/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78328
https://bravofleet.com/story/78446
https://bravofleet.com/story/78508
https://bravofleet.com/story/78749/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78049
https://bravofleet.com/story/78885/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79018
https://bravofleet.com/story/79025/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78054
https://bravofleet.com/story/78237/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78261/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78582
https://bravofleet.com/story/78898
https://bravofleet.com/story/78990
https://bravofleet.com/story/78517
https://bravofleet.com/story/79002
https://bravofleet.com/story/78824
https://bravofleet.com/story/79151
https://bravofleet.com/story/79032
https://bravofleet.com/story/78908
https://bravofleet.com/story/79208
https://bravofleet.com/story/79119
https://bravofleet.com/story/79118
https://bravofleet.com/story/78849
https://bravofleet.com/story/79037
https://bravofleet.com/story/78617
https://bravofleet.com/story/78848
https://bravofleet.com/story/79060
https://bravofleet.com/story/79346
https://bravofleet.com/story/78074
https://bravofleet.com/story/79042
https://bravofleet.com/story/79120
https://bravofleet.com/story/78806
https://bravofleet.com/story/79352
https://bravofleet.com/story/79410
https://bravofleet.com/story/78222

2023-05-20 13:48:48
Th'lora Vehl 2240

Total Comments: 2
https://bravofleet.com/story/78030 - It All Starts Somewhere
https://bravofleet.com/story/78177 - The Suicide Mission

2023-05-20 01:31:55
Aris Suin 2583

https://bravofleet.com/story/77560/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77902/
https://bravofleet.com/story/77984/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78508/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78344/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78830/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78628/
https://bravofleet.com/story/78804/
https://bravofleet.com/story/79125/

Total: 9

2023-05-19 06:23:43
Thelor ch'Idrani 2109

Just 2

https://bravofleet.com/story/78565
https://bravofleet.com/story/79037

2023-05-19 00:24:41
James MacLeod 653

Comment Link: https://bravofleet.com/story/77549

Word Count: 129 words

2023-05-05 16:17:02

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