Blood Dilithium Comment Challenge

Description

We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of our latest campaign Blood Dilithium, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Blood Dilithium Mission. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!

Criteria

  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented.
  • Stories must be part of the Blood Dilithium Mission.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Aris Suin 2583

https://bravofleet.com/story/68523
https://bravofleet.com/story/67850
https://bravofleet.com/story/67899
https://bravofleet.com/story/68223

2022-12-11 21:20:49
Azras Dex 10

Attached is the gdoc to all comments I made to stories during this campaign.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V3QCfB7_KI-ry6eVYxjLC_SSPK4wSCz6_vFKevxIpLw/edit?usp=sharing

2022-12-11 19:21:17
Aryanna Rigras 2486

11 Dec 2033

2022-12-11 17:54:33 View Image View Image
Andreus Kohl 2374

162 comments

https://bravofleet.com/story/65478
https://bravofleet.com/story/64459
https://bravofleet.com/story/65796
https://bravofleet.com/story/65791
https://bravofleet.com/story/65799
https://bravofleet.com/story/65565
https://bravofleet.com/story/65814
https://bravofleet.com/story/65840
https://bravofleet.com/story/65849
https://bravofleet.com/story/65767
https://bravofleet.com/story/65857
https://bravofleet.com/story/65859
https://bravofleet.com/story/65865
https://bravofleet.com/story/65854
https://bravofleet.com/story/65861
https://bravofleet.com/story/65782
https://bravofleet.com/story/65939
https://bravofleet.com/story/65886
https://bravofleet.com/story/65944
https://bravofleet.com/story/65968
https://bravofleet.com/story/65961
https://bravofleet.com/story/65143
https://bravofleet.com/story/66023
https://bravofleet.com/story/66026
https://bravofleet.com/story/66028
https://bravofleet.com/story/66049
https://bravofleet.com/story/66077
https://bravofleet.com/story/65874
https://bravofleet.com/story/66144
https://bravofleet.com/story/66086
https://bravofleet.com/story/64102
https://bravofleet.com/story/66157
https://bravofleet.com/story/66109
https://bravofleet.com/story/66136
https://bravofleet.com/story/66186
https://bravofleet.com/story/66255
https://bravofleet.com/story/66286
https://bravofleet.com/story/66214
https://bravofleet.com/story/66235
https://bravofleet.com/story/66240
https://bravofleet.com/story/66207
https://bravofleet.com/story/66393
https://bravofleet.com/story/66395
https://bravofleet.com/story/66407
https://bravofleet.com/story/66322
https://bravofleet.com/story/66415
https://bravofleet.com/story/66444
https://bravofleet.com/story/66469
https://bravofleet.com/story/66508
https://bravofleet.com/story/66520
https://bravofleet.com/story/66522
https://bravofleet.com/story/66545
https://bravofleet.com/story/66347
https://bravofleet.com/story/66562
https://bravofleet.com/story/66565
https://bravofleet.com/story/66571
https://bravofleet.com/story/66573
https://bravofleet.com/story/66579
https://bravofleet.com/story/66066
https://bravofleet.com/story/66590
https://bravofleet.com/story/66625
https://bravofleet.com/story/66641
https://bravofleet.com/story/66645
https://bravofleet.com/story/66711
https://bravofleet.com/story/66725
https://bravofleet.com/story/66740
https://bravofleet.com/story/66743
https://bravofleet.com/story/66747
https://bravofleet.com/story/66958
https://bravofleet.com/story/66561
https://bravofleet.com/story/66709
https://bravofleet.com/story/66832
https://bravofleet.com/story/66884
https://bravofleet.com/story/66892
https://bravofleet.com/story/66917
https://bravofleet.com/story/66906
https://bravofleet.com/story/66968
https://bravofleet.com/story/66785
https://bravofleet.com/story/67081
https://bravofleet.com/story/67085
https://bravofleet.com/story/67064
https://bravofleet.com/story/67095
https://bravofleet.com/story/67105
https://bravofleet.com/story/67122
https://bravofleet.com/story/67139
https://bravofleet.com/story/67144
https://bravofleet.com/story/67177
https://bravofleet.com/story/67233
https://bravofleet.com/story/67182
https://bravofleet.com/story/67326
https://bravofleet.com/story/66928
https://bravofleet.com/story/67245
https://bravofleet.com/story/67666
https://bravofleet.com/story/67308
https://bravofleet.com/story/67279
https://bravofleet.com/story/67451
https://bravofleet.com/story/67104
https://bravofleet.com/story/67745
https://bravofleet.com/story/67624
https://bravofleet.com/story/67738
https://bravofleet.com/story/67708
https://bravofleet.com/story/67641
https://bravofleet.com/story/67621
https://bravofleet.com/story/67448
https://bravofleet.com/story/67429
https://bravofleet.com/story/67850
https://bravofleet.com/story/67899
https://bravofleet.com/story/67627
https://bravofleet.com/story/67501
https://bravofleet.com/story/67852
https://bravofleet.com/story/67749
https://bravofleet.com/story/67973
https://bravofleet.com/story/67779
https://bravofleet.com/story/67815
https://bravofleet.com/story/68072
https://bravofleet.com/story/67891
https://bravofleet.com/story/68029
https://bravofleet.com/story/67409
https://bravofleet.com/story/67843
https://bravofleet.com/story/67845
https://bravofleet.com/story/68161
https://bravofleet.com/story/68049
https://bravofleet.com/story/68220
https://bravofleet.com/story/67835
https://bravofleet.com/story/68223
https://bravofleet.com/story/68086
https://bravofleet.com/story/68300
https://bravofleet.com/story/68313
https://bravofleet.com/story/68298
https://bravofleet.com/story/67715
https://bravofleet.com/story/68139
https://bravofleet.com/story/68264
https://bravofleet.com/story/67725
https://bravofleet.com/story/68354
https://bravofleet.com/story/68409
https://bravofleet.com/story/68370
https://bravofleet.com/story/67857
https://bravofleet.com/story/68134
https://bravofleet.com/story/68131
https://bravofleet.com/story/68209
https://bravofleet.com/story/68123
https://bravofleet.com/story/68232
https://bravofleet.com/story/68001
https://bravofleet.com/story/68122
https://bravofleet.com/story/68227
https://bravofleet.com/story/68249
https://bravofleet.com/story/68048
https://bravofleet.com/story/67807
https://bravofleet.com/story/68449
https://bravofleet.com/story/68453
https://bravofleet.com/story/68455
https://bravofleet.com/story/67918
https://bravofleet.com/story/67994
https://bravofleet.com/story/68411
https://bravofleet.com/story/68470
https://bravofleet.com/story/68414
https://bravofleet.com/story/67541
https://bravofleet.com/story/68372
https://bravofleet.com/story/68435
https://bravofleet.com/story/68346
https://bravofleet.com/story/68413
https://bravofleet.com/story/68429

2022-12-11 15:08:20
Theo Barrington 2080

Comment Challenge entry!

https://bravofleet.com/story/65796
https://bravofleet.com/story/65565
https://bravofleet.com/story/65847
https://bravofleet.com/story/65970
https://bravofleet.com/story/66107
https://bravofleet.com/story/65861
https://bravofleet.com/story/66086
https://bravofleet.com/story/66049
https://bravofleet.com/story/65849
https://bravofleet.com/story/66726
https://bravofleet.com/story/65143
https://bravofleet.com/story/66214
https://bravofleet.com/story/66347
https://bravofleet.com/story/65478
https://bravofleet.com/story/66240
https://bravofleet.com/story/66515
https://bravofleet.com/story/66928
https://bravofleet.com/story/66968
https://bravofleet.com/story/66641
https://bravofleet.com/story/66892
https://bravofleet.com/story/66341
https://bravofleet.com/story/67291
https://bravofleet.com/story/67308
https://bravofleet.com/story/66405
https://bravofleet.com/story/67641
https://bravofleet.com/story/67047
https://bravofleet.com/story/67669
https://bravofleet.com/story/67745
https://bravofleet.com/story/67845
https://bravofleet.com/story/67206
https://bravofleet.com/story/67965
https://bravofleet.com/story/67647

2022-12-11 14:46:52
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

Sarek
https://bravofleet.com/story/65847
https://bravofleet.com/story/66107
https://bravofleet.com/story/66341
https://bravofleet.com/story/66405
https://bravofleet.com/story/66518
https://bravofleet.com/story/66577
https://bravofleet.com/story/66643
https://bravofleet.com/story/67214

Endeavour
https://bravofleet.com/story/65857
https://bravofleet.com/story/66109
https://bravofleet.com/story/66345
https://bravofleet.com/story/66444
https://bravofleet.com/story/67204
https://bravofleet.com/story/67270
https://bravofleet.com/story/67327
https://bravofleet.com/story/67415
https://bravofleet.com/story/67456

Sojourner
https://bravofleet.com/story/65840
https://bravofleet.com/story/66573
https://bravofleet.com/story/66641
https://bravofleet.com/story/67281
https://bravofleet.com/story/67641
https://bravofleet.com/story/67845
https://bravofleet.com/story/68264

Osiris
https://bravofleet.com/story/66301
https://bravofleet.com/story/66750
https://bravofleet.com/story/66968
https://bravofleet.com/story/67404
https://bravofleet.com/story/67745
https://bravofleet.com/story/68072

Resolute
https://bravofleet.com/story/66322
https://bravofleet.com/story/66508
https://bravofleet.com/story/67081
https://bravofleet.com/story/67463
https://bravofleet.com/story/67624

Mackenzie
https://bravofleet.com/story/66928
https://bravofleet.com/story/65875
https://bravofleet.com/story/66545
https://bravofleet.com/story/67669

Saratoga
https://bravofleet.com/story/65968
https://bravofleet.com/story/66393
https://bravofleet.com/story/66747
https://bravofleet.com/story/67451
https://bravofleet.com/story/67621
https://bravofleet.com/story/67850
https://bravofleet.com/story/67899
https://bravofleet.com/story/68223
https://bravofleet.com/story/68300

Ulysses
https://bravofleet.com/story/65143
https://bravofleet.com/story/66579
https://bravofleet.com/story/66785
https://bravofleet.com/story/67064
https://bravofleet.com/story/67104

By no means exhaustive, by no means any good.

2022-12-11 12:14:52
Cynndle Oin'sun 2457

Comments on 12 stories, are as follows:
https://bravofleet.com/story/65784
https://bravofleet.com/story/65143
https://bravofleet.com/story/66347
https://bravofleet.com/story/66579
https://bravofleet.com/story/66709
https://bravofleet.com/story/65849
https://bravofleet.com/story/67047
https://bravofleet.com/story/67206
https://bravofleet.com/story/67409
https://bravofleet.com/story/67554
https://bravofleet.com/story/67263
https://bravofleet.com/story/67708

2022-12-09 15:17:25
Sazra Kobahl 2545

https://bravofleet.com/story/65854
https://bravofleet.com/story/65840
https://bravofleet.com/story/64459
https://bravofleet.com/story/65784
https://bravofleet.com/story/65847
https://bravofleet.com/story/65968
https://bravofleet.com/story/65565
https://bravofleet.com/story/65767
https://bravofleet.com/story/65875
https://bravofleet.com/story/65943
https://bravofleet.com/story/65961
https://bravofleet.com/story/65978
https://bravofleet.com/story/65857
https://bravofleet.com/story/65143
https://bravofleet.com/story/65970
https://bravofleet.com/story/65077
https://bravofleet.com/story/66207
https://bravofleet.com/story/66089
https://bravofleet.com/story/66065
https://bravofleet.com/story/66144
https://bravofleet.com/story/66173
https://bravofleet.com/story/66107
https://bravofleet.com/story/66300
https://bravofleet.com/story/66341
https://bravofleet.com/story/65791
https://bravofleet.com/story/65799
https://bravofleet.com/story/65861
https://bravofleet.com/story/64102
https://bravofleet.com/story/66095
https://bravofleet.com/story/66347
https://bravofleet.com/story/66579
https://bravofleet.com/story/66709
https://bravofleet.com/story/66785
https://bravofleet.com/story/65849
https://bravofleet.com/story/66405
https://bravofleet.com/story/66518
https://bravofleet.com/story/66577
https://bravofleet.com/story/65859
https://bravofleet.com/story/66157
https://bravofleet.com/story/67064
https://bravofleet.com/story/66023
https://bravofleet.com/story/66026
https://bravofleet.com/story/66109
https://bravofleet.com/story/66393
https://bravofleet.com/story/66747
https://bravofleet.com/story/67554
https://bravofleet.com/story/67621
https://bravofleet.com/story/67451
https://bravofleet.com/story/67182
https://bravofleet.com/story/67263
https://bravofleet.com/story/67708
https://bravofleet.com/story/67770

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2022-12-03 12:43:38

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