[Phase 1]: The First Act

Description

To throw off the yoke of the Romulan Star Empire, the people of the Velorum Sector need help. Protection, support, supplies – the path to self-determination is a long one with many obstacles, and the Fourth Fleet is here to render assistance.

Write about how your ship’s adventure in the Velorum Sector begins. ‘Begins’ is a loose word – it can be the moment your characters learn of their mission. The moment they arrive. The ‘inciting incident’ setting the tone of everything that is to come. This is the first act of the three act play, and this story should be a defining moment of Act 1: Setup.

Your story might address one or several of the following questions:
– Where are your crew when they learn of their mission to Velorum? What are they doing, how does this disrupt their lives and work?
– What does their arrival to Velorum look like? What initial obstacles or encounters will set the tone for the mission to come?
– What is the first real challenge the ship faces in Operation: Sundered Wings?

Criteria

  • Your story should be between 2,000 and 3,000 words in length (Google Docs, not BFMS, will be used to determine word count)
  • The entry should be written in your Command’s Mission attached to the Sundered Wings Fleet-Wide Mission, and linked to in the submission. While we allow and encourage you to choose a Story from your ongoing Fleet Action fiction, only the single submitted Story will be graded and judged.
  • Stories from Starbase Bravo are not eligible for this competition.
  • Submitted Stories must have a single author.
  • Stories will be graded in accordance with the Bravo Fleet Fiction Rubric, which marks on the following criteria: Language, Style, & Mechanics; Adherence to Canon; Perspective; Characterization; Originality; Use of the Prompt.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Evelyn Sommers 2446

Story: Where were you when the Empire Fell?
From Mission: From Romulus with Love

I've included links from both SBB and Google Docs.

https://bravofleet.com/story/54745

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OT6QgPslNKVhq7MvX5RZ0D78m6XEqYUXg5sFi0OXW_o/edit?usp=sharing

2022-06-10 18:12:48
Vausees Vax 2184

VividShado

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I4zGsxpwoIMMywSIynVGrNETEU8Re1HZ_a1HdfpbM-E/edit?usp=sharing

2022-06-09 07:40:54
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

https://bravofleet.com/story/54988

2022-06-07 08:58:04
R’Tor 2309

https://bravofleet.com/story/54779

Hope this meets parameters

2022-06-07 00:23:41
Thelor ch'Idrani 2109

https://bravofleet.com/story/54533

2022-06-02 01:42:57
Andreus Kohl 2374

https://bravofleet.com/story/54452

2022-05-31 21:05:18
Edwin Wagner 2468

https://bravofleet.com/?post_type=story&p=54245

2022-05-29 05:52:00
Lihran 2461

https://bravofleet.com/story/54206

2022-05-29 04:04:24
Azras Dex 10

https://bravofleet.com/story/54110

2022-05-28 16:12:06
Cynndle Oin'sun 2457

The Crew of the USS Daradax go about their normal routine aware of what they are about to be ordered.

This is the first chapter of the Sundered Wing story just before they receive the transmission.
https://bravofleet.com/story/54130

The Complete mission can be found here: https://bravofleet.com/mission/53631

2022-05-28 09:16:20

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