[Phase 3]: Comment Challenge

Description

We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of the Fleet Action, and writes love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, something on which the Lore Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Sundered Wings Mission for Phase 2. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!

Criteria

  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented.
  • Stories must have been posted during Phase 3 of the Fleet Action.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Lore Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Erill'Yun Mek 2187

Total: 2 comments

McGig - https://bravofleet.com/story/56823

Brendan - https://bravofleet.com/story/56830

2022-07-10 23:48:07
Th'lora Vehl 2240

And Lo, Again the Wheel Turns - https://bravofleet.com/story/56772

2022-07-10 21:21:43
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121

https://bravofleet.com/story/56613/
https://bravofleet.com/story/56635/
https://bravofleet.com/story/56109/
https://bravofleet.com/story/56887/
https://bravofleet.com/story/57141/
https://bravofleet.com/story/56288/

2022-07-10 10:54:25
Azras Dex 10

https://bravofleet.com/story/56588
https://bravofleet.com/story/56617
https://bravofleet.com/story/56677
https://bravofleet.com/story/56660
https://bravofleet.com/story/56673
https://bravofleet.com/story/56823
https://bravofleet.com/story/57068/
https://bravofleet.com/story/57136/

2022-07-10 05:55:15
Andreus Kohl 2374

28

https://bravofleet.com/story/56492
https://bravofleet.com/story/56538
https://bravofleet.com/story/56533
https://bravofleet.com/story/56524
https://bravofleet.com/story/55036
https://bravofleet.com/story/56588
https://bravofleet.com/story/56635
https://bravofleet.com/story/56613
https://bravofleet.com/story/56607
https://bravofleet.com/story/56611
https://bravofleet.com/story/56006
https://bravofleet.com/story/56724
https://bravofleet.com/story/56831
https://bravofleet.com/story/56677
https://bravofleet.com/story/56823
https://bravofleet.com/story/56821
https://bravofleet.com/story/56800
https://bravofleet.com/story/56658
https://bravofleet.com/story/56693
https://bravofleet.com/story/56763
https://bravofleet.com/story/56887
https://bravofleet.com/story/56911
https://bravofleet.com/story/55965
https://bravofleet.com/story/56660
https://bravofleet.com/story/56879
https://bravofleet.com/story/57084
https://bravofleet.com/story/56950
https://bravofleet.com/story/56909

2022-07-09 21:04:00

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