The Fat Ones

Description

The Galaxy-class starship is perhaps one of the most recognisable in the history of Star Trek. For this competition, your task is to write a poem using information from the Galaxy-class wiki page as a reference point.

Submissions for this competition should take the form of an acrostic poem. This is a short poem where the first letters spell out something relevant to the poem, often the subject matter at hand. The most famous example is Edgar Allen Poe’s Elizabeth.

Example:

Giants of the stars,
Architects of exploration,
Luxurious carpets underfoot,
Adventures unending through time and space.
Xenobiology always offline,
Yearning for knowledge.

G-A-L-A-X-Y

Criteria

  • Submissions should take the form of an acrostic poem entered directly into the competition submission box.
  • The poem should be at least 6 lines long forming a word with a minimum of 6 characters.
  • Submissions will be judged on a scale of 1-5 (5 being highest) for the following 4 criteria; 30% Correctness of form and style, 30% Creativity of content and style, 30% Relevance to canon and ongoing in-universe activities, 10% Correctness of spelling and grammar
  • The highest-scoring poem will be declared the winner, ties will be decided by the order of submission.

Winners

Submissions

User ID Content Date Entry
Cressida Brennan 2765

D - Dreamscapes of new stories, the strange, the unique
I - Illustrious persona, intention oblique
P - Professional distance and still oh so close
L - Learnt appreciation and not to transpose
O - Optimism when dire those stories unfold
M - Mellifluous speeches but truth they don’t hold
A - Ambrosial promises, skilled puppeteers
C - Crescendo of hopes colliding with fears
Y - Yonder-reaching and felt across endless frontiers

2025-02-08 12:38:39
Aaslin Braim 1225
Private Submission
2025-02-07 00:13:48
Grigor Eisenberg-Sloane 102

Seldom does one trek aimlessly across the stars,
Away from all the the things that we call ours.
Undiscovered country, how wide and deep and vast,
Carrying to the explorer's torch handed forth from the past.
Ever onward with no fear,
Regal ship that we hold dear.

Sometimes, though, the time of danger comes.
Emergencies with klaxon-sounds like drums.
Parting in safety the vulnerable from the strong,
Entire families sent off and in safety belong.
Running through the corridors,
Ascending by calls of officers,
Time stands still as children cry,
Innocents depart and then do fly.
Off and away in the grand, safe disk,
Never to truly fight or share the stardrive's risk.

2025-02-05 15:53:17
Varen Wyll 2419

Envelop me in your great shining arms,
Xanthic stars summon us beyond the horizon,
Paitently waiting for us to arrive.
Lonely luminaries,
Orbiting perpetually the unknown core,
Resonating with secrets undiscovered.
Embrace me now as family,
Ride with me to the new dawn.

E-X-P-L-O-R-E-R

2025-02-03 22:51:44
Nathan Hawthorne 2199

Gain enough prestige to captain this fine ship
A lot of crew will be needed to staff it
Load it full of science bays
Any other mission equipment can go in the cargo hold
Xenoracism will not be tolerated
You can replicate all the yogurt you want once we leave space dock

Galaxy

2025-02-03 19:55:05
Callen Varro 2063

Guardian of the endless black,
Advancing forth, no turning back.
Luxury and power blend,
A vessel built to seek, defend.
Xenoliths on planets strange,
Years of stars within our range.

2025-02-03 12:25:12
Mamof 2848

With antimatter’s pulse, the ship comes alive,
As Class-7 drives ensure we survive.
Reaching new speeds, unmatched in the void,
Powered by tech that cannot be destroyed.

Critical to the ship’s every quest,
Operating flawlessly, performing its best.
Routing energy with force and precision,
Exploring the stars on a limitless mission.

W-A-R-P C-O-R-E

2025-02-02 00:50:16
Jeremy L. Ryan 2796

Giants of the Fleet, legends in motion,
Arbiters of peace and diplomatic devotion.
Luxurious quarters and labs, clad in a hull of might,
Armed for defense, putting up a hell of a fight.
Xenon lit panels glow soft in the dark,
Your journeys continue, Galaxy-Class leaving her mark.

2025-02-01 21:07:15
Collin Conrade 3033

Endlessly charting the unknown expanse,
Xenon stars and nebulae in a cosmic dance.
Pushing boundaries, seeking new life,
Luminous trails through the galaxy's rife.
Odyssey's line, protectors they've been,
Realms of science, peace, and dreams unseen.
Ever questing, with a crew so bold,
Rising to adventures, stories unfold.

E-X-P-L-O-R-E-R

2025-02-01 16:02:24

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