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[Phase 2]: Comment Challenge


We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of the Fleet Action, and writes love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, something on which the Lore Office has given guidance.

Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Sundered Wings Mission for Phase 2. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!


  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented.
  • Stories must have been posted during Phase 2 of the Fleet Action.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Lore Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.


User ID Date Entry
Aryanna Rigras 2486 2022-06-26 17:02:51
Imya Jori 10 2022-06-26 05:51:23
Andreus Kohl 2374 2022-06-25 02:44:31
Vausees Vax 2184 2022-06-25 00:50:27
Cynndle Oin'sun 2457 2022-06-24 13:48:56
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121 2022-06-22 10:39:13
Max Barrick 2036 2022-06-13 02:17:52

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