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[LAB Phase 2]: Comment Race


We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of the Labyrinth Fleet Action, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance. Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide Labyrinth Mission. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!


  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented, and include a total count.
  • Stories must be part of the Labyrinth Mission and be posted during Phase 2.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.


User ID Date Entry
Imya Jori 10 2024-07-14 23:04:37
Edward O'Gallagher 2688 2024-07-14 13:36:10
Ryoko Takato 2545 2024-07-14 13:14:21
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik 2121 2024-07-14 04:24:52
James Miller 2575 2024-07-14 03:19:29
Varen Wyll 2419 2024-07-13 19:58:51
Elena Mitchell 2266 2024-07-13 19:45:34
Aaslin Braim 1225 2024-07-13 00:11:22
Callen Varro 2063 2024-07-12 08:51:59

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